AWS guidance documentation change
Summary
Fixed grammatical errors, typos, and improved sentence clarity throughout the document. Changes include verb tense corrections, article additions, and preposition fixes.
Security assessment
The changes are purely grammatical and editorial improvements with no mention of vulnerabilities, security incidents, or security mechanisms. Existing security references (IAM, SSO, Row Level Security) were only mentioned in passing without modification to security content.
Diff
diff --git a/guidance/latest/cloud-intelligence-dashboards/health-events-dashboard.md b/guidance/latest/cloud-intelligence-dashboards/health-events-dashboard.md index 5e29207cd..5ea52f5f6 100644 --- a//guidance/latest/cloud-intelligence-dashboards/health-events-dashboard.md +++ b//guidance/latest/cloud-intelligence-dashboards/health-events-dashboard.md @@ -13 +13 @@ IntroductionArchitectureDemo DashboardPrerequisitesDeploymentUpdateAuthorsContri -The CID Health Events Dashboard uses data collected from [AWS Health Organizational View API](https://docs.aws.amazon.com/health/latest/ug/aggregate-events.html) and creates a variety of visualizations for your past, current, and upcoming AWS Health events. The dashboard’s charts allow you analyze individual or multiple events to raise awareness and facilitate your operational planning. +The CID Health Events Dashboard uses data collected from [AWS Health Organizational View API](https://docs.aws.amazon.com/health/latest/ug/aggregate-events.html) and creates a variety of visualizations for your past, current, and upcoming AWS Health events. The dashboard’s charts allow you to analyze individual or multiple events to raise awareness and facilitate your operational planning. @@ -32 +32 @@ The Data Collection Stack uses AWS Organizations API to collect daily the AWS He -Please note that the data on this dashboard may have a lag of 48 hour or more. Please do not use this dashboard for monitoring or real time operational events. This dashboard is exclusively for review and longer term operational planning. Please use [AWS Health Notifications](https://docs.aws.amazon.com/health/latest/ug/manage-user-notifications.html) to get the real time information when needed. +Please note that the data on this dashboard may have a lag of 48 hours or more. Please do not use this dashboard for monitoring or real time operational events. This dashboard is exclusively for review and longer term operational planning. Please use [AWS Health Notifications](https://docs.aws.amazon.com/health/latest/ug/manage-user-notifications.html) to get the real time information when needed. @@ -48 +48 @@ We recommend installing the Health Events Dashboards in a separate Data Collecti - 1. The [Data Collection Stack](./data-collection.html) provides an Amazon Lambda function that assumes a role in one or multiple Management accounts to retrieve daily the AWS Health Data and store it on Amazon S3. The Lambda only pulls data that are updated since the last retrieval. The stack also provides AWS Glue Tables to query collected data. + 1. The [Data Collection Stack](./data-collection.html) provides an Amazon Lambda function that assumes a role in one or multiple Management accounts to retrieve daily the AWS Health Data and store it on Amazon S3. The Lambda only pulls data that has been updated since the last retrieval. The stack also provides AWS Glue Tables to query collected data. @@ -50 +50 @@ We recommend installing the Health Events Dashboards in a separate Data Collecti - 2. Cloud Intelligence Dashboards provide Amazon Athena views for querying data directly from the S3 bucket using an AWS Glue tables and Amazon Quick Sight Datasets and Dashboards, allowing Operation Teams acceding AWS Health data. Access can be secured through AWS IAM, IIC (SSO), and optional Row Level Security. + 2. Cloud Intelligence Dashboards provide Amazon Athena views for querying data directly from the S3 bucket using an AWS Glue tables and Amazon Quick Sight Datasets and Dashboards, allowing Operations Teams to access AWS Health data. Access can be secured through AWS IAM, IIC (SSO), and optional Row Level Security. @@ -57 +57 @@ We recommend installing the Health Events Dashboards in a separate Data Collecti -Get more familiar with Dashboard using the live, interactive demo dashboard following this [link](https://cid.workshops.aws.dev/demo/?dashboard=health-events-dashboard) +Get more familiar with the Dashboard using the live, interactive demo dashboard following this [link](https://cid.workshops.aws.dev/demo/?dashboard=health-events-dashboard) @@ -160 +160 @@ CloudFormation - 1. Log in to to your **Data Collection** Account. 1. Click the Launch Stack button below to open the **pre-populated stack template** in your CloudFormation. + 1. Log in to your **Data Collection** Account. 1. Click the Launch Stack button below to open the **pre-populated stack template** in your CloudFormation. @@ -166 +166 @@ CloudFormation - 3. Leave **Parameters** values as it is. + 3. Leave **Parameters** values as they are. @@ -184 +184 @@ Command Line -Alternative method to install dashboards is the [cid-cmd](https://github.com/aws-solutions-library-samples/cloud-intelligence-dashboards-framework/blob/main/CID-CMD.md#command-line-tool-cid-cmd) tool. +An alternative method to install dashboards is the [cid-cmd](https://github.com/aws-solutions-library-samples/cloud-intelligence-dashboards-framework/blob/main/CID-CMD.md#command-line-tool-cid-cmd) tool. @@ -186 +186 @@ Alternative method to install dashboards is the [cid-cmd](https://github.com/aws - 1. Log in to to your **Data Collection** Account. + 1. Log in to your **Data Collection** Account. @@ -188 +188 @@ Alternative method to install dashboards is the [cid-cmd](https://github.com/aws - 2. Open up a command-line interface with permissions to run API requests in your AWS account. We recommend to use [CloudShell](https://console.aws.amazon.com/cloudshell). + 2. Open up a command-line interface with permissions to run API requests in your AWS account. We recommend using [CloudShell](https://console.aws.amazon.com/cloudshell). @@ -205 +205 @@ Please follow the instructions from the deployment wizard. More info about comma -Please note that dashboards are not updated with update of CloudFormation Stack. When new version of the dashboard template is released, you can update your dashboard by running the following command in your command-line interface: +Please note that dashboards are not updated with update of CloudFormation Stack. When a new version of the dashboard template is released, you can update your dashboard by running the following command in your command-line interface: