AWS guidance documentation change
Summary
Minor grammatical corrections and language improvements throughout the document including fixing typos, verb agreement, and sentence structure
Security assessment
Changes are exclusively grammatical improvements and typo fixes with no security-related content modifications. The mention of RLS (Row-Level Security) is unchanged and not part of the modifications.
Diff
diff --git a/guidance/latest/cloud-intelligence-dashboards/cora-dashboard.md b/guidance/latest/cloud-intelligence-dashboards/cora-dashboard.md index 34507fd41..d3c15fe12 100644 --- a//guidance/latest/cloud-intelligence-dashboards/cora-dashboard.md +++ b//guidance/latest/cloud-intelligence-dashboards/cora-dashboard.md @@ -26 +26 @@ Usage Optimizations include: -Rate Optimization consist of: +Rate Optimization consists of: @@ -50 +50 @@ Using the RLS (Row-Level Security) mechanism, this dashboard can be shared withi -Get more familiar with Dashboard using the live, interactive demo dashboard following this [link](https://cid.workshops.aws.dev/demo?dashboard=cora) +Get more familiar with the Dashboard using the live, interactive demo dashboard following this [link](https://cid.workshops.aws.dev/demo?dashboard=cora) @@ -78 +78 @@ CloudFormation - 1. Log in to to your **Data Collection** Account. + 1. Log in to your **Data Collection** Account. @@ -89 +89 @@ CloudFormation - 2. Leave **Parameters** values as it is. + 2. Leave **Parameters** values as they are. @@ -107 +107 @@ Command Line -Alternative method to install dashboards is the [cid-cmd](https://github.com/aws-solutions-library-samples/cloud-intelligence-dashboards-framework/blob/main/CID-CMD.md#command-line-tool-cid-cmd) tool. +An alternative method to install dashboards is the [cid-cmd](https://github.com/aws-solutions-library-samples/cloud-intelligence-dashboards-framework/blob/main/CID-CMD.md#command-line-tool-cid-cmd) tool. @@ -109 +109 @@ Alternative method to install dashboards is the [cid-cmd](https://github.com/aws - 1. Log in to to your **Data Collection** Account. + 1. Log in to your **Data Collection** Account. @@ -111 +111 @@ Alternative method to install dashboards is the [cid-cmd](https://github.com/aws - 2. Open up a command-line interface with permissions to run API requests in your AWS account. We recommend to use [CloudShell](https://console.aws.amazon.com/cloudshell). + 2. Open up a command-line interface with permissions to run API requests in your AWS account. We recommend using [CloudShell](https://console.aws.amazon.com/cloudshell). @@ -171 +171 @@ For detailed instructions, refer to the [Terraform Deployment README](https://gi -Please note that dashboards are not updated with update of CloudFormation Stack. When new version of the dashboard template is released, you can update your dashboard by running the following command in your command-line interface: +Please note that dashboards are not updated with update of CloudFormation Stack. When a new version of the dashboard template is released, you can update your dashboard by running the following command in your command-line interface: @@ -180 +180 @@ The dashboard has several tabs and we recommend starting with the Summary. Here -We recommend first estimate your Rightsizing, Upgrade, Migration and Stop-Idle opportunities. Typically it takes time to implement these recommendations especially in the scale. We recommend you proceed with commitment (reserved instances and savings plan) for the volume that take into account your rightsizing plan. +We recommend you first estimate your Rightsizing, Upgrade, Migration and Stop-Idle opportunities. Typically it takes time to implement these recommendations especially at scale. We recommend you proceed with commitment (reserved instances and savings plan) for the volume that takes into account your rightsizing plan. @@ -197 +197 @@ The dashboard also utilizes [Cost Allocation Tags](https://docs.aws.amazon.com/a -The AWS Cost Optimization Hub Console UI displays opportunities in a Donut chart with a special [deduplication](https://aws.amazon.com/aws-cost-management/cost-optimization-hub/faqs/#:~:text=How%20does%20Cost%20Optimization%20Hub%20ensure%20savings%20from%20multiple%20recommendations%20are%20not%20double%20counted%3F). Commitment savings are shown accounting for the potential impact of implementing rightsizing recommendations. However, the Data Export of Cost Optimization do not have data for this level of adjustment. +The AWS Cost Optimization Hub Console UI displays opportunities in a Donut chart with a special [deduplication](https://aws.amazon.com/aws-cost-management/cost-optimization-hub/faqs/#:~:text=How%20does%20Cost%20Optimization%20Hub%20ensure%20savings%20from%20multiple%20recommendations%20are%20not%20double%20counted%3F). Commitment savings are shown accounting for the potential impact of implementing rightsizing recommendations. However, the Data Export of Cost Optimization does not have data for this level of adjustment. @@ -199 +199 @@ The AWS Cost Optimization Hub Console UI displays opportunities in a Donut chart -The dashboard deduplicates recommendations by resource ID. Please note that dashboard shows recommendations for Rate Optimization and Usage Optimization deduplicated separately. But Rate Optimization are NOT taking into account the results of Usage Optimization (Rightsizing, Stop, Upgrade and such). +The dashboard deduplicates recommendations by resource ID. Please note that dashboard shows recommendations for Rate Optimization and Usage Optimization deduplicated separately. But Rate Optimization is NOT taking into account the results of Usage Optimization (Rightsizing, Stop, Upgrade and such).