AWS directoryservice documentation change
Summary
Grammatical fixes and rephrased security group configuration instructions for clarity
Security assessment
Changes improve clarity of existing security group configuration steps but do not introduce new security content or address specific vulnerabilities.
Diff
diff --git a/directoryservice/latest/admin-guide/step1_setup_networking.md b/directoryservice/latest/admin-guide/step1_setup_networking.md index 253d167dd..29d119e56 100644 --- a//directoryservice/latest/admin-guide/step1_setup_networking.md +++ b//directoryservice/latest/admin-guide/step1_setup_networking.md @@ -9 +9 @@ PrerequisitesConfigure a VPC peering connection between the directory owner and -You’ll need to establish an Amazon VPC peering connection to share your AWS Managed Microsoft AD directory (directory account owner) with another AWS account (directory consumer account). See the following procedures for steps to set up your networking environment for a shared AWS Managed Microsoft AD. +You will need to establish an Amazon VPC peering connection to share your AWS Managed Microsoft AD directory (directory account owner) with another AWS account (directory consumer account). See the following procedures for steps to set up your networking environment for a shared AWS Managed Microsoft AD. @@ -30 +30 @@ While there are many ways to connect Directory owner and Directory consumer acco -The VPC peering connection you'll create is between the directory consumer and directory owner VPCs. Follow these steps to configure a VPC peering connection for connectivity with the directory consumer account. With this connection you can route traffic between both VPCs using private IP addresses. +The VPC peering connection you will create is between the directory consumer and directory owner VPCs. Follow these steps to configure a VPC peering connection for connectivity with the directory consumer account. With this connection you can route traffic between both VPCs using private IP addresses. @@ -98 +98 @@ Now that your VPC peering connection is active, you must add an entry to your VP -Make sure to configure your directory consumer VPCs’ security group to enable outbound traffic by adding the Active Directory protocols and ports to the outbound rules table. For more information, see [Security groups for your VPC](https://docs.aws.amazon.com/vpc/latest/userguide/VPC_SecurityGroups.html) and [AWS Managed Microsoft AD prerequisites](https://docs.aws.amazon.com/directoryservice/latest/admin-guide/ms_ad_getting_started_prereqs.html). +Add Active Directory protocols and ports to the outbound rules for security groups in directory consumer VPCs. For more information, see [Security groups for your VPC](https://docs.aws.amazon.com/vpc/latest/userguide/VPC_SecurityGroups.html) and [AWS Managed Microsoft AD prerequisites](https://docs.aws.amazon.com/directoryservice/latest/admin-guide/ms_ad_getting_started_prereqs.html).