AWS drs documentation change
Summary
Updated documentation links and improved verb tense consistency in installation instructions. Changed reference from general 'Supported Operating Systems' to specific 'supported Linux operating systems' documentation. Minor grammatical improvements throughout.
Security assessment
Changes focus on documentation clarity and accuracy without addressing security vulnerabilities or introducing security features. The TLS 1.2 mention remains unchanged from previous version.
Diff
diff --git a/drs/latest/userguide/linux-agent.md b/drs/latest/userguide/linux-agent.md index 092dc5e7c..bc64d0b3f 100644 --- a/drs/latest/userguide/linux-agent.md +++ b/drs/latest/userguide/linux-agent.md @@ -7 +7 @@ -To install the agent on a Linux source server, you should ensure that your source meets all the requirements list in the [Supported Operating Systems documentation](./Supported-Operating-Systems.html). +To install the agent on a Linux source server, you should ensure that your source meets all the requirements list in the [supported Linux operating systems](./Supported-Operating-Systems-Linux.html) documentation. @@ -44 +44 @@ If you are using a legacy Linux OS that does not support TLS 1.2, you need to do -The command line will indicate when the installer has been successfully downloaded. +The command line indicates when the installer has been successfully downloaded. @@ -68 +68 @@ If you are using a Windows Servers of versions 2016 or older, and are using Powe - 2. Use the following command on your source server in order to run the installation script. + 2. Use this command on your source server in order to run the installation script. @@ -78 +78 @@ If you require additional customization, you can add a variety of parameters to -The installer will confirm that the installation of the AWS Replication Agent has started. +The installer confirms that the installation of the AWS Replication Agent has started. @@ -84 +84 @@ The installer will confirm that the installation of the AWS Replication Agent ha - 3. The installer will prompt you to enter your **AWS Region Name** , the **AWS Access Key ID** and **AWS Secret Access Key** that you previously generated. Enter the complete AWS Region name (for example, eu-central-1), the full AWS Access Key ID and the full AWS Secret Access Key. + 3. The installer prompts you to enter your **AWS Region Name** , the **AWS Access Key ID** and **AWS Secret Access Key** that you previously generated. Enter the complete AWS Region name (for example, eu-central-1), the full AWS Access Key ID and the full AWS Secret Access Key. @@ -97 +97 @@ You can also enter these values as part of the installation script command param - 4. Once you have entered your credentials, the installer will identify volumes for replication. The installer will display the identified disks and prompt you to choose the disks you want to replicate. + 4. Once you have entered your credentials, the installer will identify volumes for replication. The installer displays the identified disks and prompt you to choose the disks you want to replicate. @@ -108 +108 @@ You can also enter these values as part of the installation script command param -To replicate some of the disks, type the path of the disks, separated by a comma, as illustrated in the installer (such as: /dev/sda, /dev/sdb, etc). To replicate all of the disks, press Enter. The installer will identify the selected disks and print their size. +To replicate some of the disks, type the path of the disks, separated by a comma, as illustrated in the installer (such as: /dev/sda, /dev/sdb, etc). To replicate all of the disks, press Enter. The installer identifies the selected disks and prints their size. @@ -117 +117 @@ To replicate some of the disks, type the path of the disks, separated by a comma -The installer will confirm that all disks were successfully identified. +The installer confirms that all disks were successfully identified. @@ -141 +141 @@ Note that the returned disks will need be replicated from the beginning. Any dis - 5. After all of the disks that will be replicated have been successfully identified, the installer will download and install the AWS Replication Agent on the source server. + 5. After all of the disks that will be replicated have been successfully identified, the installer downloads and installs the AWS Replication Agent on the source server. @@ -151 +151 @@ Note that the returned disks will need be replicated from the beginning. Any dis - 6. Once the AWS Replication Agent is installed, the server will be added to the AWS Elastic Disaster Recovery console and will undergo the initial sync process. The installer will provide you with the source server's ID. + 6. Once the AWS Replication Agent is installed, the server is added to the AWS Elastic Disaster Recovery console and will undergo the initial sync process. The installer will provide you with the source server's ID.