AWS drs documentation change
Summary
Updated phrasing for conciseness (changed 'the following' to 'these', simplified sentence structures), modified legal disclaimer to remove product-specific references, and adjusted command syntax wording
Security assessment
Changes are primarily grammatical improvements and legal disclaimer updates. No specific security vulnerabilities or weaknesses are addressed. The firewall/port guidance remains substantively unchanged, just rephrased for clarity.
Diff
diff --git a/drs/latest/userguide/Network-Requirements.md index 1292d79cb..ff4058f56 100644 --- a/drs/latest/userguide/Network-Requirements.md +++ b/drs/latest/userguide/Network-Requirements.md @@ -9 +9 @@ Communication over TCP port 443Communication between the source servers and Elas -To prepare your network for running Elastic Disaster Recovery, you need to set the following connectivity settings: +To prepare your network for running Elastic Disaster Recovery, set these connectivity settings: @@ -35 +39 @@ All communication is encrypted with TLS. -Add the following IP addresses and URLs to your firewall: +Add these IP addresses and URLs to your firewall: @@ -50 +54 @@ Amazon S3 service URLs (required for downloading AWS Elastic Disaster Recovery s - * The following S3 buckets should be allowed: + * Allow these S3 buckets: @@ -110 +114 @@ Each source server that is added to AWS Elastic Disaster Recovery (AWS DRS) must -The following are the main operations performed through TCP port 443: +These are the main operations performed through TCP port 443: @@ -141 +145 @@ If there is no connection between your source servers and AWS Elastic Disaster R -The information provided in this section is for general security and firewall guidance only. The information is provided on "AS IS" basis, with no guarantee of completeness, accuracy or timeliness, and without warranty or representations of any kind, expressed or implied. In no event will AWS Elastic Disaster Recovery and/or its subsidiaries and/or their employees or service providers be liable to you or anyone else for any decision made or action taken in reliance on the information provided here or for any direct, indirect, consequential, special or similar damages (including any kind of loss), even if advised of the possibility of such damages. AWS Elastic Disaster Recovery is not responsible for the update, validation or support of security and firewall information. +The information provided in this section is for general security and firewall guidance only. The information is provided on "AS IS" basis, with no guarantee of completeness, accuracy or timeliness, and without warranty or representations of any kind, expressed or implied. In no event will AWS and/or its subsidiaries and/or their employees or service providers be liable to you or anyone else for any decision made or action taken in reliance on the information provided here or for any direct, indirect, consequential, special or similar damages (including any kind of loss), even if advised of the possibility of such damages. AWS is not responsible for the update, validation or support of security and firewall information. @@ -145 +149 @@ The information provided in this section is for general security and firewall gu -Enabling Windows Firewall for TCP port 443 connectivity will allow your servers to achieve outbound connectivity. You may still need to adjust other external components, such as firewall blocking or incorrect routes, in order to achieve full connectivity. +Enabling Windows Firewall for TCP port 443 connectivity allows your servers to achieve outbound connectivity. You may still need to adjust other external components, such as firewall blocking or incorrect routes, in order to achieve full connectivity. @@ -149 +153 @@ Enabling Windows Firewall for TCP port 443 connectivity will allow your servers -These instructions are intended for the default OS firewall. You will need to consult the documentation of any third-party local firewall you use to learn how to enable TCP port 443 connectivity. +These instructions are intended for the default OS firewall. Consult the documentation of any third-party local firewall you use to learn how to enable TCP port 443 connectivity. @@ -170 +174 @@ These instructions are intended for the default OS firewall. You will need to co - 1. Enter the following command to add the required Firewall rule: + 1. Enter this command to add the required Firewall rule: @@ -174 +178 @@ _sudo iptables -A OUTPUT -p tcp --dport 443 -j ACCEPT_ - 2. To verify the creation of the Firewall rule, enter the following commands: + 2. To verify the creation of the Firewall rule, enter these commands: